Monday, February 25, 2008

Weather for ReadWritePoem

Motorcycle Haiku

The air smelled like pine
as we wove around corners
on my husband’s bike.

Splashes of color
on the September hillsides.
Sun warm on my face.

Such a bonus day
this summer-like afternoon.
My husband and I

spooned together.
I wrapped my arms around him
and smelled his clean shirt.


Richard said...

Linda, nicely done. Open and homey.

Christine said...

The best kind of love. And I love that clean-guy scent.

Rethabile said...

Simple and clean. Very nice.

paisley said...

there is something exhilaratingly about being"spooned" with someone on a powerful piece of machinery... and very little else... isn't there?????

Crafty Green Poet said...

I'm totally happy with my partner but I've always wished he had a motorbike, so i really enjoyed this series

totomai said...

can i say i love haikus? this was no excemption. such vivid images and lovely sentiments.

anthonynorth said...

I went along for the ride, and enjoyed it.

gautami tripathy said...

Love pours out, Linda!

UL said...

clean and pure sentiment is love

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