Friday, November 21, 2008

Sound for TOP

I have no idea how to incorporate sound for my poetry so here's a poem I wrote about my granddaughter, Kylie's, first smiles.
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The Sound of a Smile

I hear music
when you smile,
notes tinkling
in the air
and swirling
in a merry dance.

On this day
in cold February
the tune
was a summer
waltz, slow
and easy,

thawing out
our winter


tumblewords said...

Aw, baby smiles do have such marvelous sound! Nice work, for sure!!

Stan Ski said...

A baby's smile is always music to my ears.

anthonynorth said...

Oh yes, a smile can say so much.

Felicity said...

Love the poem.
And your granddaughter is absolutely adorable. :)

one more believer said...

babies are everything... i can get lost in a smile... loved yr poem!!!

SweetTalkingGuy said...

I hear music when you smile. Beautiful words!

totomai said...

such a sweet sounding poem. yup and that smiles could melt the coldness brought by snow :-)

Tammy said...

Not all babies are beautiful, but your grandbaby is! I hope she gets to read this one day.

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