Wednesday, November 19, 2008

3WW: Corrupt, Intellect, Tension

Corrupt Intellect Tension
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Red claws
squeezing my neck,
corrupting intellect.
I see dots in front of my eyes.
Tension.

7 comments:

ThomG said...

Wow, I really like the construction of this.

Quin Browne said...

whoa.

tumblewords said...

Cool! I feel the tension!
An aside: Do you think the dots are on your blog page? Just saying. Grin.

DJ Mommy said...

This gave me the chills. Spooky feeling!

Rio said...

I love a cinquain and you wrote this so well. Awesome.

Lucy said...

red claws? a lobster attack? haha
great job Lyn!

Thanks For 2 Day said...

Sounds like a migraine to me. Jan

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