for TOP April 4, 2008
It's Saturday and I'm sitting in Border's in Portland, Maine waiting for my mother-in-law's flight to come in. I have a very low connection. Borders is a T-Mobile hot spot but I don't have an account so I'm hoping I can get this posted without losing my signal.
I wrote this poem on Thursday afternoon waiting for my mom's flight to arrive in Portsmouth, NH. She flew in for a funeral. This morning she was scheduled to fly back to Florida but we woke up to the news that Skybus had ceased operations. Luckily, I was able to get her a flight out of Manchester, NH. I dropped her off and now am in waiting mode.
Okay, enough chit chat. Here's my poem.
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Mt. Washington sits
like a gallon of milk
on a blue tablecloth
as I head south
this Thursday morning
playing hooky from school.
At Wildcat Mountain
the skiers are confetti
as they weave
down the white frosting.
The whole valley
spreads out before me
as I swerve around
Dead Man’s Curve
in Pinkham Notch.
I’m singing
“Cover of a Rolling Stone”
by Dr. Hook as loud
as I can. See the notes
flying out my cracked-
open window, landing
on the snow
and perching on the limbs
of the bare trees?
5 comments:
that first stanza is killer...
Love two dramatic images ~ the one of Mt Washington and the skiers looking like confetti!
Gemma
I love this - it's alive with imagery...
vivid imagery in this one!
Amazing portrait of the mountain in the first verse, then you/I/we become part of it and slither down, down, down...
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