Flights of Fancy
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A simple house
near the ocean
white curtains
sashaying
to a rock ‘n’ roll
breeze
Big bookcases
a small TV
a poetry book
open on my
grandfather’s
trunk
me
on a red bicycle
curls bouncing
under my visor
I can’t pedal
fast enough
to the beach
17 comments:
sashaying curtains - great image!
I can visualise you on that cycle!
children's day out
I like the build up of images and the way the title and the last verse sandwich the poem nicely..
I like this, very breezy and descriptive. I felt like I was there. Well done.
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There's a lot packed into this little poem. Nice imagery, well done!
ahh, and I can't run fast enough either. very nice!
Thanks for your visit Linda
Wistful ..dreamy..beautiful :)
Great images drawn with lovely colors and sense of movement in each verse ... sashaying curtains ..and "curls bouncing" are my fav !
I am putting up one more for the same prompt "Flight"
"The Flight of the Eagle"
Do look it up
Back again Linda! :P
Thought I would give you my link for the second poem here !
Hope you will look it up :)
Thanks
http://la-muse07.blogspot.com/2007/11/eagle.html
Big bookcases
a small TV
a poetry book
open on my
grandfather’s
trunk
lovely image painted.
Adored the image of curtains sashaying to a rock n' roll breeze.
Delightful!
Gemma
What a lovely memory ... told with such bold imagery ... I can see you pedal off to the beach!
The imagery is fabulous - just the right amount of words... well done!
Great, great, great! Has wonderful elements!
i live moments from the beach,, and cannot seem to get myself out of the house to go there... i do so wish i had a companion of sorts at times like this... someone that would take me beautiful places ... this was so serene... so lovely....
There is nothing like a house by the ocean and that rock'n'roll breeze sure does clear the cobwebs from the mind. Brilliant!
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what a li'l girl thinks!
only a li'l girl knows
what a li'l girl thinks!
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