Monday, July 13, 2009

Monday Poetry Train: I Saw Time

I saw time
this July morning
on I 95
between Saco
and Biddeford, Maine.

In the middle
of a bank
of lavender clover,
a clump of brown-eyed-susans

staring at me
through autumn

I rolled
my window
up against
the chill.


Julia Smith said...

Fantastic sense of foreboding even amongst the cheery blooms.

Charlz C said...

very soft, light & beautiful. fall is my favorite time of the year.

thank you so muuch for commenting on Skin Deep.



Stan Ski said...

Great snapshot of a beautiful day.

Jeeves said...

The images just flow....Wonderful poem.

gautami tripathy said...

You say it so pictorially!

the sky melts away from the earth

angie said...


wonderful how the poem shifts and changes focus in such a small space.

Lion-ess said...

very true... I pictured every moment. I long for it now in this heat!

Susan Helene Gottfried said...

Aww, man. I hate it when my favorite flowers foreshadow something icky.

But... to be honest, I could do with a blast of impending autumn. I'm ready to put this horrid summer behind me.

Linda's Poems