Berlin High School Junior Prom 1966
My Prom date
was such a drip.
Tall, skinny, and blond,
not even cute.
Tongue-tied and sweaty
he held me loosely
while we danced
to horrible band music
that floated around us
in cracked notes
then got stuck in tissue-
paper roses.
His eyes were hypnotic
in their blue blankness
and zombie-like I followed
his shuffling steps
all that boring night,
all the way to 11 o’clock
when we left and went
to his nerdy friend’s party
where there wasn’t even
any booze. On the way home
I sat in the cloud of my pink
gown sulking because
this long-anticipated night
had turned out to be as flavorless
as water. I don’t even
remember his name.
21 comments:
You can't win them all!
lol...it seems so many of us have this type of memory from school dances. The reality rarely lives up to the fantasy!
Ah, the most anticipated events can be the worse. I can feel your annoyance :-)
wow, heartfelt and an interesting reflection.
Annoyance tinged memories...
The very stuff of life.
Nice write!
then got stuck in tissue-
paper roses.
excellent.
All dressed up and nowhere to go!
Oh, how DOES that happen? :) Well written description.
how sad for you, but at least you get to write about it , I the "cloud of pink gown" - certainly an image easy to visualize
Well written, but such a sad tale!
I cannot stop laughing!! This is fantastic.
What a wonderful beginning: my prom date was such a drip. good stuff!
this really expresses the feeling, very well done.
Wow, so evocative because I think we've all had those dates. Thankfully, mine wasn't prom, but still...
some memory it was !!!
very interesting recollections...
yet as u mentioned, it something u may not wanna recollect...
Oh yes the dreaded prom.
How things so high turn out to be so low.
Sad.But a bad day lets us see a more colorfukl tommorow;)
~Harsha
what a painful memory.. sad but true so many such events turn out to be much less than anticipated.. i loved the way you told it,, it was the perfect outlet for the prompt...
What a memory!
dragon rider
perfectly posed linda... we can all relate in one way or another...dare i question what his interpretation was on that same evening...hopefully you have not broken his heart by this revelation??!!
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