Wednesday, July 1, 2009

3WW: Sweet, Yearn, Collapse

My brain has been on vacation! Sometimes I just need a break. Here's a little cinquain.


When I Yearn

Barefoot
I walk along
the mirror of low tide.
The problems of my day collapse.
Sweet peace.

11 comments:

ThomG said...

simple, and simply wonderful. I'm feeling it.

Tumblewords: said...

Perfect!

Ofira Sephiroth said...

Short and sweet. Very nicely written.

floreta said...

mine is a similar setting. i like your interpretation. definitely sounds nice to walk barefoot.

AD said...

couldnt have been more prompt :)
My 3WW

Jeeves said...

Wow. Linda. I wanted to write something like this. You did it.

anthonynorth said...

A perfect image there.

Daily Panic said...

a beach can always remind us that we are on the edge of the continent and put some distance between us and our problems.

lissa said...

sounds like a sweet walk, quiet walks can sooth the day's rough edges

pjd said...

Barefoot walks bring us back to peace. Nice.

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