drizzle all over me
on this first real day
of finally spring.
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This is such a fun poem! I know exactly what you mean, how great the first sunny day of spring is. And "the first real day / of finally spring" is a great phrase.
7 comments:
This is such a fun poem! I know exactly what you mean, how great the first sunny day of spring is. And "the first real day / of finally spring" is a great phrase.
I never thought of it before but I think I'd like the sun to drizzle over me too!
What a unique image! I could just picture the front porch and it makes me want to pop some popcorn.
I'll remember this image forever - how clever - love it!
This poem really pops out at you!
what striking imagery!
Very apt!
over the ridge and hard planes
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