wonderfully built. You've risen to the challenge.
Oh this is lovely! Beautifully written!!
Hiya Linda, I love this - it's very well written, maybe you'd like to link it too this weeks Naisaiku Challenge? I'd love for everybody to read it.
Linda, this is lovely.
Excellent words - and my garden is layering as I write :-)
Wonderful Linda! Is thia Naisaiku? I flows so well.
Good job! It doesn't feel like a form, per se... Has nice rhythm and lovely words with fine imagery!
enjoyed reading this :)
Refreshing and uplifting...it put a 'spring' in my step. Thanks! :~)
yes... and the form is very well done
It's a gorgeous haiku turned into the other thing (naisaiku?). I love that you did the 575 and turned it around the fulcrum of reactive love. But the image of feelings popping out, earnest as tulips... wonderful!
I like this expression of love in bloom.
Great Naisaiku! Very springy!A Climb Through Altered Landscapes
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