Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Earnest Layer Reactive for 3WW

Earnest as tulips
your feelings pop out in spring
layer by layer
REACTIVE LOVE
Layer by layer
your feelings pop out in spring
earnest as tulips

15 comments:

ThomG said...

wonderfully built. You've risen to the challenge.

SweetTalkingGuy.. said...

Oh this is lovely! Beautifully written!!

Wendy Naisa said...

Hiya Linda, I love this - it's very well written, maybe you'd like to link it too this weeks Naisaiku Challenge? I'd love for everybody to read it.

susan said...

Linda, this is lovely.

anthonynorth said...

Excellent words - and my garden is layering as I write :-)

Tammy said...

Wonderful Linda! Is thia Naisaiku? I flows so well.

Tumblewords: said...

Good job! It doesn't feel like a form, per se... Has nice rhythm and lovely words with fine imagery!

Pretty Me!! said...

enjoyed reading this :)

Fledgling Poet said...

Refreshing and uplifting...it put a 'spring' in my step. Thanks! :~)

totomai said...

yes... and the form is very well done

pjd said...

It's a gorgeous haiku turned into the other thing (naisaiku?). I love that you did the 575 and turned it around the fulcrum of reactive love. But the image of feelings popping out, earnest as tulips... wonderful!

Angel said...

Cool construction!

Daily Panic said...

I like this expression of love in bloom.

gautami tripathy said...

Great Naisaiku! Very springy!

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spacedlaw said...

Nice image.

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