Thursday, March 26, 2009

Season Change for TOP

Yesterday Afternoon

The front porch
was a pan
full of melted butter.

I sat like a bowl
of popcorn
and let the sun

drizzle all over me
on this first real day
of finally spring.


Anonymous said...

This is such a fun poem! I know exactly what you mean, how great the first sunny day of spring is. And "the first real day / of finally spring" is a great phrase.

SweetTalkingGuy said...

I never thought of it before but I think I'd like the sun to drizzle over me too!

Pam said...

What a unique image! I could just picture the front porch and it makes me want to pop some popcorn.

Tumblewords: said...

I'll remember this image forever - how clever - love it!

Philos said...

This poem really pops out at you!

Crafty Green Poet said...

what striking imagery!

gautami tripathy said...

Very apt!

over the ridge and hard planes

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