Wednesday, March 11, 2009

Naisaiku: Temper winter spirits

Come, March, and cajole
the recluse crocus faces
out of their prisons.
TEMPER WINTER SPIRITS
out of their prisons.
The recluse crocus faces
come. March and cajole.

10 comments:

Tumblewords: said...

A winner. Yes, indeed.

Tan said...

Hey ... that was a nice one ... short one, as you said ... but carries the meanings all right :)

ThomG said...

You've risen to the challenge, I must say.

anthonynorth said...

Excellently done.

Fledgling Poet said...

This was so good...I just noticed my crocuses in my yard today. Spring is almost here...great read!

Tammy said...

Your use of March was very clever. Enjoyed this, as always.

Angel said...

Very nice, and I sure am ready for spring!

Jeeves said...

Very very nice one.

Megha said...

Like the use of words. the recluse ready for change!

TC said...

I'm so in agreement with all of that! Winter, begone! :)

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