I wrote this during block 4's journal writing a week and a half ago. The topic was: the end of the day
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The End of the Day
Settles like a deflated balloon
around the ankles
of the night
and I kick it
out of the way
into the corner
of used time.
Then I get into
my waterbed
and read for a bit
until I feel
the weight
of my eyes
sagging into
sleep.
Settles like a deflated balloon
around the ankles
of the night
and I kick it
out of the way
into the corner
of used time.
Then I get into
my waterbed
and read for a bit
until I feel
the weight
of my eyes
sagging into
sleep.
10 comments:
absolutely dreamy, can't wait to read your book, hope to see you soon
A perfect end to the day.
Phew, I like the way you kick the title - although I wouldn't want to get into a waterbed, in case I got wet.
The imagery in this is so neat! Love that you kick day's into the used time corner and revamp for the next phase. Great.
I never thought of it like that, but pretty much the way do it - apart from the waterbed.
I love this: "into the corner of used time". I know the feeling...
I loved the imagery of this...very nice read!
lovely imagery. this is how i like to fall asleep :)
sweet :)
seems like it settled more like a pair of knickers...
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