Monday, February 16, 2009

Poetry Train: The End of the Day

I wrote this during block 4's journal writing a week and a half ago. The topic was: the end of the day

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The End of the Day

Settles like a deflated balloon
around the ankles
of the night

and I kick it
out of the way
into the corner

of used time.
Then I get into
my waterbed

and read for a bit
until I feel
the weight

of my eyes
sagging into


Regina said...

absolutely dreamy, can't wait to read your book, hope to see you soon

anthonynorth said...

A perfect end to the day.

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Phew, I like the way you kick the title - although I wouldn't want to get into a waterbed, in case I got wet.

Tumblewords: said...

The imagery in this is so neat! Love that you kick day's into the used time corner and revamp for the next phase. Great.

Stan Ski said...

I never thought of it like that, but pretty much the way do it - apart from the waterbed.

John Tran said...

I love this: "into the corner of used time". I know the feeling...

Fledgling Poet said...

I loved the imagery of this...very nice read!

floreta said...

lovely imagery. this is how i like to fall asleep :)

Winnie the poohi said...

sweet :)

richard said...

seems like it settled more like a pair of knickers...

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