Thursday, February 19, 2009

Coin a New Word for TOP


When snowflakes
of girl friend issues
settle cold
and icy
on his neck

and stress
builds up
in a suffocating
down jacket,

he can’t wait
to get home
and IM
his paligal.

Those winter
melt away
drip by drip
as they
type sunshine.


Tumblewords: said...

Gotta love that one! All parts and words. Paligal feels good and I love the way IM's type sunshine.

anthonynorth said...

She sounds worth meeting :-)
Enjoyed that.

Sweet Talking Guy said...

This is better than advertising copy, You could seel soap with a slogan like that 'he can't wait to get home and IM his paligal'

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Stan Ski said...

Does that make him ER PALIBOY???

Ofira Sephiroth said...

paligal fits perfectly and I love your opening stanza.

susan said...

Wow! Great imagery and use of a made-up word. Love mix of cherriness and pain.

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