Thursday, February 19, 2009

Naisaiku: Under Quilts

Impulses, yearnings,
managed risks, and candid love~
pieces of romance
UNDER QUILTS
pieces of romance,
managed risks, and candid love~
impulses, yearnings.

13 comments:

Stan Ski said...

You've made every word count here.

ThomG said...

You certainly did. I'm going to have to check out the style here.

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Phew, so that's what goes on under quilts!

Thanks for taking up The NaisaiKu.. Challenge!

Wendy Naisa said...

This was a fun read! Which is what it's all about, thanks for playing along.

Pretty Me!! said...

so sensuous !!!

Jeeves said...

This was soooo nice. Nice sensual feel to it.

Wendy Naisa said...

Hi Linda, I'm putting you on the participants blog roll on the NaisaiKu.. site, is there any chance of you linking back to us in your 'poetry sites' sidebar? It would mean a lot to me and the future of this weekly prompt. Many thanks, again for joining in on Week One of
The NaisaiKu.. Challenge!

!nversed Poignancy! said...

Beautifully scripted.
I could see it as "sensual economics" with shares of Impulses,yearnings,risks and love adding to a perfect returns[under the quilt]

Lovely!

Wendy Naisa said...

Linda, Thanks for the link!

susan said...

Didn't know this form. Enjoyed it. I liked that it doesn't simply fit a form but sings. Thanks.

spacedlaw said...

Sweet poem.

Heather said...

Love this! Beautiful job. ;o)

James said...

I like the way "managed risks" plays in this surrounded by the more impulsive connotations of the other words.

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