Wednesday, October 15, 2008

3WW: delicate, night, jaded

Delicate Night Jaded
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“Love is delicate”
she warned her jaded boyfriend.
He laughed in her face

turning lacy thoughts
into leather valentines
the night he left her.

11 comments:

Judy said...

Thanks for coming by and for the comments. The poem you created with the words is powerful. The image of the lacy thoughts turning into leather valentines is excellent. Thank you for sharing

Richard said...

Cad!

Nice blend of straight-forward description, and metaphor.

paisley said...

excellent use of the prompts,, and since i have always been a sucker for leather and lace... you got me....

TC said...

This was so sad to me. Aptly so, but still. I was reading a book the other day that had the phrase "Love is a contact sport of the heart and each time we come away a little more bruised than the last time." This reminds me of it.

gautami tripathy said...

She is better off without him..

I take the dare!

tumblewords said...

leather valentines - a very showing phrase...nicely done!!

one more believer said...

linda, that was beautiful... great use of 3WW!!...

mgirl said...

She is better off without him. Very nice use of the prompts.

susan said...

Good write. Especially like your closing image.

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