Thursday, January 10, 2008

Haiku

3WW for January 9, 2008

gossip naïve station
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Stationed behind shrubs
I hear gossip about you~
I used to be naïve.

8 comments:

Jujee said...

The last line was quite powerful.

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mariacristina said...

Your haiku says a lot. Great job. Good luck with the song.

Christy said...

'used to be' says so much
growing is painful

well done!

LittleWing said...

...ouch that hurt!....wow, that was so very, very good...i enjoy the little poems that say so much....

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

Love how this calls attention to what was not written as well.

Glad you took time to write this. Hope your song is written already.

tumblewords said...

Great!!

Michelle Johnson said...

Nice haiku. Thanks for taking the time to write this while trying to write your mother's song. Good luck on finishing that song, too. Have a nice day.

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