This Is What the Neighbors Saw
At first,
A campfire
licking the stars,
an empty
Coors Light can,
a half-filled
margarita glass,
two people
dancing
to “Beautiful Tonight”
on the deck.
Later,
smoldering embers,
a deserted deck,
lights winking off
in the camp.
10 comments:
Lovely 'place'!
Very romantic. I can smell the campfire smoke.
You really recreate place with very few words here, excellent
Cool. I like the mood we leave the poem with.
That's quite lovely.
(Here via TOP.)
You've definately captured the sense of place - but, I wonder what the neighbours thought?
Great last stanza!
very romantic. love the image of lights winking off.
Maybe the preface to "How to get a live."
Concise & slight in length but full of atmosphere.
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