A hint of wrinkles
along with a sheen of gray~
content holding hands.
WHERE HAS LUST GONE?
Not content with hands
he nuzzles under the gray,
kisses each wrinkle.
Love at 50 years...at least for us! And we enjoy each other more and more with each passing day. I am very grateful and you should be too. You described it perfectly!
Such beautiful portrayal of true love - it goes beyond grey and wrinkles! Leaves the reader with such a warm feeling. With a person like that by one’s side, who is afraid of old age!
13 comments:
Oh this is just lovely ... lovely, lovely!
Aah, lust doesn't disappear with age..lovely piece. Jae
very nice. must be lust is like wine or cheese--gets more subtle with age
Love at 50 years...at least for us! And we enjoy each other more and more with each passing day. I am very grateful and you should be too. You described it perfectly!
b
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Oh, I do like this. Nice 3WW. :-)
I really enjoyed this piece. Love the sentiment!
Sweet, sweet, sweet! Love it.
As an aging gentleman, I appreciate the tenderness of this piece.
Such beautiful portrayal of true love - it goes beyond grey and wrinkles! Leaves the reader with such a warm feeling. With a person like that by one’s side, who is afraid of old age!
I loved this.
a subtle hint
Nicely Linda!
Funny twist to this!
how wonderful sweet and dear to my heart... move over wrinkles here comes the lust...
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