Wednesday, October 6, 2010

3WW: Hint, Lust, Sheen

A hint of wrinkles
along with a sheen of gray~
content holding hands.
WHERE HAS LUST GONE?
Not content with hands
he nuzzles under the gray,
kisses each wrinkle.

13 comments:

Deborah said...

Oh this is just lovely ... lovely, lovely!

jaerose said...

Aah, lust doesn't disappear with age..lovely piece. Jae

barbara said...

very nice. must be lust is like wine or cheese--gets more subtle with age

b said...

Love at 50 years...at least for us! And we enjoy each other more and more with each passing day. I am very grateful and you should be too. You described it perfectly!

b

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Susannah said...

Oh, I do like this. Nice 3WW. :-)

Angel said...

I really enjoyed this piece. Love the sentiment!

Tumblewords: said...

Sweet, sweet, sweet! Love it.

ThomG said...

As an aging gentleman, I appreciate the tenderness of this piece.

nimaruichi said...

Such beautiful portrayal of true love - it goes beyond grey and wrinkles! Leaves the reader with such a warm feeling. With a person like that by one’s side, who is afraid of old age!

gautami tripathy said...

I loved this.

a subtle hint

Andy Sewina said...

Nicely Linda!

OMJ said...

Funny twist to this!

ms pie said...

how wonderful sweet and dear to my heart... move over wrinkles here comes the lust...

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