The hard word in this one. Excellently done.
A very good poem, I like the image of feelings shattering, it reminds me of a mirror breaking into sharp shards. Emotions can be just as painful as being cut by a broken mirror.
nicely done. now go enjoy the sunshine.
The creative mind at work...just great. Do you count the words or does it just come to you? bhttp://torristravels.blogspot.com/2009/08/in-our-memories.html
You do cinquains so well!blowing over that mug of coffee
Nice continuity!
Amazing how you can convey so much with so few words. A universal truth that is well written.
Ah, yes. Nicely done!
That was a great cinquain!Nice use of the words!
in so few words you've said so muchvery nice Linda
Thank goodness they do vanish. Nice job Linda! Is school back in?
Great use of the prompt words.
just brilliant! :)
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The hard word in this one. Excellently done.
A very good poem, I like the image of feelings shattering, it reminds me of a mirror breaking into sharp shards. Emotions can be just as painful as being cut by a broken mirror.
nicely done. now go enjoy the sunshine.
The creative mind at work...just great. Do you count the words or does it just come to you?
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http://torristravels.blogspot.com/2009/08/in-our-memories.html
You do cinquains so well!
blowing over that mug of coffee
Nice continuity!
Amazing how you can convey so much with so few words. A universal truth that is well written.
Ah, yes. Nicely done!
That was a great cinquain!
Nice use of the words!
in so few words you've said so much
very nice Linda
Thank goodness they do vanish. Nice job Linda! Is school back in?
Great use of the prompt words.
just brilliant! :)
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