Wednesday, August 26, 2009

3WW: Fracture, Noise, Vanish

Noises
from your angry
mouth fracture the moonlight.
Feelings shatter into shards, then
vanish.

14 comments:

anthonynorth said...

The hard word in this one. Excellently done.

Jane Doe said...

A very good poem, I like the image of feelings shattering, it reminds me of a mirror breaking into sharp shards. Emotions can be just as painful as being cut by a broken mirror.

ThomG said...

nicely done. now go enjoy the sunshine.

b said...

The creative mind at work...just great. Do you count the words or does it just come to you?

b
http://torristravels.blogspot.com/2009/08/in-our-memories.html

gautami tripathy said...

You do cinquains so well!

blowing over that mug of coffee

Missy said...

Isn't it true, anger is so loud, it rings in silence and in verbal words.

Excellent

Andy Sewina said...

Nice continuity!

Mark said...

Amazing how you can convey so much with so few words. A universal truth that is well written.

Tumblewords: said...

Ah, yes. Nicely done!

Just someone said...

That was a great cinquain!

Nice use of the words!

Lucy said...

in so few words you've said so much
very nice Linda

Tammy said...

Thank goodness they do vanish. Nice job Linda! Is school back in?

Stan Ski said...

Great use of the prompt words.

Leo said...

just brilliant! :)

Linda's Poems