Wednesday, August 5, 2009

3WW: Accentuate, Glamour, Pitch

An Annoyance Sandwich with a Side of Glamour

Pitch pines
surround our camp,
accentuate problems,
write calligraphy on the sky,
and drip.

17 comments:

ThomG said...

I love it. It's so simple and fresh, but with some wit, too.

anthonynorth said...

Yes, simple but so clever.

Sweetest in the Gale said...

It drips with visual imagery...loved it!

KJ McLean said...

I feel as if I'm sitting there watching them, trying to read the calligraphy and getting drops in my eyes! I like it! (The poem, not the pitchy eye drops. *grin*)

Fiducia said...

aww..so sweet!
small, short, subtle and soothing..:)
Loved the feel and it was natural for all to be there, in time!
Keep writing..:)

Andy Sewina said...

Very visual! You take me there!!

Daily Panic said...

sweet. about camping?

Tumblewords: said...

Clever! I love the calligraphy reference.

Mark said...

I like the form and the substance.

Americanising Desi said...

very fresh and very full of life :)

View on my way down *3ww*

Ann (bunnygirl) said...

Very nice. I think I've been on a camping trip like that.

Bobbie said...

Very nice and flowing write. :) Great use of this prompt.

gautami tripathy said...

I loved the drip!

accentuated aura

lissa said...

write calligraphy on the sky, and drip. - love these words together

Jeeves said...

Simple and good....

Dee Martin said...

I love the idea of pines being calligraphy brushes! Very creative!

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