Wednesday, May 20, 2009

3WW: efficient, optimize, treacherous

Waterfalls of change
are treacherous. I paddle
with efficient strokes.
OPTIMIZE MY CHANCES
With efficient strokes
I paddle through treacherous
waterfalls of change.

15 comments:

andy said...

Nicely Linda, clever use of the NaiSaiKu, I like the way you got the three little words in and optimizing Optimize in the title.
Nicely

ThomG said...

Great NaiSaiKu Linda. Don't forget to leave a link on the NaiSaiKu Challenge site to share. Hope you're feeling OK, too.

gautami tripathy said...

Linda, do take care.

This is a beautiful NaisaiKu!

no pawns spared

Jeeves said...

Simple and very good. Like this one a lot.

anthonynorth said...

An excellent look at life there. Hope you're okay.

paisley said...

excellent choice of a venue for the words. i just tried my hand at one of these yesterday. it is posted on ...just paisley

pia said...

I don't know NaiSaiKu but I do like it

Tumblewords: said...

Wow! Love it! Love it!

Kristy Worden said...

I'm not sure what NaiSaiku is... but I'm sure this is a good one... I'll have to go look it up.

Daily Panic said...

there was a lot of hope in this. Change is treacherous.
happy 3WW

Pretty Me!! said...

nice thought !!

Neverending story said...

Ok, so there is also NaiSaiku, my poetry knowledge grows in leaps and bounds. This worked well. Heading for waterfalls of change myself and rather looking forward to the ride.

MichaelO said...

Love the river as a metaphor for change! Very nice.

susan said...

Really made this form work. Great use of the words.

blisshappens said...

I love this! thank you for sharing, this is a keeper! it may end up posted in my office as inspiration (if you wouldn't mind!) -Meg

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