Waterfalls of change
are treacherous. I paddle
with efficient strokes.
OPTIMIZE MY CHANCES
With efficient strokes
I paddle through treacherous
waterfalls of change.
Ok, so there is also NaiSaiku, my poetry knowledge grows in leaps and bounds. This worked well. Heading for waterfalls of change myself and rather looking forward to the ride.
15 comments:
Nicely Linda, clever use of the NaiSaiKu, I like the way you got the three little words in and optimizing Optimize in the title.
Nicely
Great NaiSaiKu Linda. Don't forget to leave a link on the NaiSaiKu Challenge site to share. Hope you're feeling OK, too.
Linda, do take care.
This is a beautiful NaisaiKu!
no pawns spared
Simple and very good. Like this one a lot.
An excellent look at life there. Hope you're okay.
excellent choice of a venue for the words. i just tried my hand at one of these yesterday. it is posted on ...just paisley
I don't know NaiSaiKu but I do like it
Wow! Love it! Love it!
I'm not sure what NaiSaiku is... but I'm sure this is a good one... I'll have to go look it up.
there was a lot of hope in this. Change is treacherous.
happy 3WW
nice thought !!
Ok, so there is also NaiSaiku, my poetry knowledge grows in leaps and bounds. This worked well. Heading for waterfalls of change myself and rather looking forward to the ride.
Love the river as a metaphor for change! Very nice.
Really made this form work. Great use of the words.
I love this! thank you for sharing, this is a keeper! it may end up posted in my office as inspiration (if you wouldn't mind!) -Meg
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