Wednesday, May 13, 2009

3WW: Bicker, Nervous, Trajectory

We bicker, we fight.
The trajectory of hate
is a loaded gun.
TOO MAD TO BE NERVOUS
of your loaded gun,
trajectory of your hate,
bickering, fighting.

13 comments:

anthonynorth said...

Powerful words today.

zoya gautam said...

..a poem that's flashing the colors of violence - - (color-inversion is the only hope ) ..

ThomG said...

It's been interesting to see what the words brought out in everyone. Yours are dark, brooding. And powerful, like Tony says. Nice stuff.

Tumblewords: said...

That form works perfectly for your words and images. Great....

Andy Sewina said...

The images are timeless and reflect the human condition, I love the TITLE and the different ways it can be read, (or is that just me?) anyway, nicely done!!

MichaelO said...

Very nicely done, Linda! Seems we were in synch with these words today.

Andy, yes I think it does read in different ways. Particularly adding the more English bent on mad.

bellamocha said...

Very, very good; strong, powerful words! I especially like your line 'Too Mad to be Nervous' which really struck a cord with me!!
Bella:)

Daily Panic said...

I agree with bellamocha-"too mad to be nervous"
those words captured the emotion of the piece.

paisley said...

one excellent reason not to pursue a relationship of any kind......

susan said...

Loaded is perfect. Makes me nervous. Well done, Linda.

Tammy said...

Nice form for fighting.

gautami tripathy said...

Great NaisaiKu!

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