Oh, my! This is great!
Great, yes, but (gulp) I think you're a syllable short on the second line. (add may.)
this is marraige,,, i mean,, isn't it????
a hesitant kiss - love that!
I know that feeling!*grin*book of myth or reality?
made me smile !!! wondering what makes my friends jealous !!
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Oh, my! This is great!
Great, yes, but (gulp) I think you're a syllable short on the second line.
(add may.)
this is marraige,,, i mean,, isn't it????
a hesitant kiss - love that!
I know that feeling!
*grin*
book of myth or reality?
made me smile !!! wondering what makes my friends jealous !!
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