Wednesday, August 6, 2008

3WW: kissed/killed

Million Time Unnoticed
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A million bright stars
went unnoticed and time stopped
the night you killed me.

Whoops, meant to type “kissed.”
Freudian slip? No, just truth.
I died the night we kissed.

13 comments:

Lucy said...

Kisses that slay me! ooohlala!

TC said...

I was already torn between laughing and going "aww" when I read Lucy's comment. Laugther soooo won :-)

anthonynorth said...

Good humour there. I liked it.

lissa said...

amusing but sort of mysterious as well

Giggles said...

Wow you left me wondering....was it good or bad!! Very clever....almost said cleber!! lol

Hugs Giggles

Writer on Board said...

Laughed and loved it. Thank you, Linda.

Brendan said...

Harm in boon in every meeting, as Jack Gilbert once said ... Died and gone to heaven!!!

Joyce said...

Linda - EEEK!!! You scared me. Is this a bad love, or a wonderful, overwhelming love? No need to really answer me, but . . . I just got scared, that's all. :P

paisley said...

very clever...

Rae Trigg said...

Very humorous and yet there is an darker element there of whether this this love is good or bad.

one more believer said...

wow.. bowled me over...

susan said...

oh, like the ambiguity.

Cynthia said...

adore this "slip" of a poem,
with a bible full of meaning.

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