Intimate River Waiting
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She’d always heard
that love was a river,
that the more intimate
you became with its depths
the easier you could drown.
So, she avoided the whirlpools
and stayed close to shore.
She didn’t know a waterfall
was waiting around the bend.
It catapulted her over the edge
and into the churning arms
of wet, wild, wonderful lust.
Then she lost herself
and died while the river
continued on, searching
for new victims.
10 comments:
Wow....the first part of this poem is me....Although I haven't hit the waterfall yet! You are my favorite poet on line!! Really wonderful work!
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Fear often leads the way from an imagined frying pan to a real fire. Nicely done. I do enjoy coming here on Wednesdays.
Oh, this is wonderfully well written.
oh this is great.. i feel like i have been her... i am happy knowing i have known that kind of love...
That sent a shiver through me. Well done!
linda, that is one of the most beautiful poems about a river i've ever read..yes, i'd die a thousand times and more for those churning arms.. better to have lived and die then to die and not live.. yes, no
I really like that you played on a cliche and ended up with a good poem.
I agree with Pam. Well done. Such an interesting turn at the end.
wow... very nice...
awesome - a modern day myth, that
waits for us all.
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