What?! She got up? I didn't expect that.
"The sunrise was a paradeof smiles." Beautiful line & intriguing poem
A very surprise ending. I wasn't expecting that. Nice!Pamela
You made a poem of my recurring dream.
What a great start to the day! I enjoyed this.
I'm thinking she got up AFTER. :) Nice work!!
Great job of painting the scene...ending caught me completely off guard...great. Vb
Fun ending. I enjoyed what you did with the Wordle.
My thought is, she got up in the aftermath..:Drivulets of spaceDue to Census work for the past one month, I have not been able to visit and comment. I will be back with a vengeance after a day or two!
The ending was quite a surprise.
I wish that wasn't a dream. I was loving the flow ;)
Ahhh...just another day! An unexpected ending. Nice one.My new blog: www.takeahappybreak.com
that ending is a killer. because you wonder what really happen then.
Agreed, "parade of smiles" is beautiful.
Very effective ending to a well written poem. Like other readers, I really dig that "parade / of smiles." line.
hi linda love yr new blog and your header... oh man daffodils and tulips... im already searching for the crocus to start popping outta the snow... great post to the wordle the words melted so lovely... too bad, she missed out...
wow, what a complete and fun story.here is mine:http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2011/03/big-tent-poetry-in-55-words.htmlThanks for reading.
Demanding written with an unexpected end. I enjoyed it.
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