Sunday, September 18, 2011

Betrayal for One Single Impression

Betrayal

The wind takes my breath
and flings it down the beach
out of reach
one breath
after another
stolen
gone
I suck on emptiness.

4 comments:

Shauna said...

that is betrayal - you wrote this
sexy and urgently.

teric said...

I love your use of words, so simple yet powerful.

The Cello Strings said...

apt one...

Kim Nelson said...

You offer an entirely unique take on the prompt. I love the originality, the staccato feel and the use of traditionally calming images in an antithetical way. Terrific.

http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/09/18/betrayal/

Linda's Poems