My feet were killing me
in those white high heels.
The descent seemed too steep
and perilous for my inexperienced
feet. But I held onto the railing
took a deep breath, and started down
while you waited with the minister
in the living room, a confident smile
on your face, the sun flaring over you
creating a surreal atmosphere.
Blinded, I tripped on the last step;
you rushed over, picked me up,
straightened my tiny veil,
and carried me into the brightness.
11 comments:
Wow what an entry down the aisle!!
That was heartwarming a picture evoked by your words :)
What a happy, lovely surprising post. Thanks for lightening things up a bit today. Needed it! Here's my 3WW contribution. You'll see it is not nearly as upbeat!http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/01/19/in-my-tucson/
Sheilagh Lee said:Truly beautiful.Left me tear up
oh linda that is so lovely...
Oh! Wow! that is beautiful! didn't realize at the start
that is lovely... here come's the bride!
Oh I could so picture that lol
Well done :)
What a happy twist to these ominous words. I love the brightness.
very interesting use of the words. at first it felt a little dreaded, and the end was a surprise.
beautiful, really.
How beautiful to have someone to carry you into the brightness - whether you trip on your heels or not! Jae
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