Wednesday, July 21, 2010

3WW: Bait, Jump, Victim

Swallowed the bait whole
then jumped around for a while~
another victim
MY HUSBAND’S DIABOLICAL LURING
Another victim
swallows the alluring bait.
The fish jump. I jump.
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To see a picture of the actual fish he caught yesterday click here.

12 comments:

ThomG said...

Wonderful images and a great fish, too. Can I have some tuna?

anthonynorth said...

That was great fun. Enjoyed it.

K said...

I could see the fish! Good job.

gautami tripathy said...

I had fun reading it!

like an automata

Leo said...

hehe.. could see the fish too.. :) a surprise ending given the start n the flow.. i was expecting this to go somewhere else.. enjoyed the read!

mark said...

Whole lotta jumpin' going on, right?

Well done!

lissa said...

wow! big fish! fun poem

Amity said...

wow...i feel like jumping too out of glee seeing the bait got its victim!!!

Stan Ski said...

Should have seen the one that got away...:)

shail said...

Both the fish and you jump?? :) Great.

Dee Martin said...

wow - puts my little bass story to shame lol. That is one huge fish!

Thomma Lyn said...

Excellent imagery -- I like the metaphor of the fish.

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