A stark last line. Powerful.
stark and powerful, yes. Visual, too.
Very short but the message is convey so powerfuly!Very deep!
By the way I have one poem up on "One single impression" check it out hope you like it.
I love that last line.gravely offended
Strong haiku! Nicely worked.
read such a wonderful haiku after loong !
I love this, the last line took me for sure.
The last line got me, too. but there were clues. I love it.
It spoke a lot to me, good Haiku.
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