Wednesday, June 4, 2008

Deny Smile Uncomfortable.

Well, it's the end of the school year and my mom is living with us for a few weeks so I haven't have much time for writing. Here's a little haiku using the three words:
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You smiled at a girl.
That made me uncomfortable.
You deny. I know.

13 comments:

paisley said...

well thanks for stopping in anyway... i will be here when you get more free time...

TC said...

Good luck with all you have going on :)

Short, sweet and to the point is often a good way to go.

gautami tripathy said...

Sometimes life gets busy.


Sweet haiku..

WriterKat said...

Nice!

forgetfulone said...

Excellent haiku.

texasblu said...

LOL! Caught in the act - shame shame! :)

Have a great time with your mom!

anthonynorth said...

Caught! What a fool :-)
Short but great.

Tammy said...

They always deny it don't they? ;) Enjoy your family Linda.

Giggles said...

ah this is good...

Rae Trigg said...

Very nice - pointed and with a punch.

one more believer said...

one of the edgey detours of love.. eyes see everything..

Fledgling Poet said...

So much said with so little words...lol! I enjoyed that. :~)

Tammie Lee said...

ouch to the subject
wonderful to the poem

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