Saturday, May 24, 2008

Triolet for TOP

This woke me up this morning! I even looked it up. I've got to get a life!
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Triolet

I have a problem with the triolet.
Does it rhyme with barrette
Or is it French like beret?
I have a problem; with the triolet
sounding like a three-way lay,
people might expect more than I bet
I have. A problem with the triolet
is that it rhymes with beret and barrette.

4 comments:

cordieb said...

Cool Triolet. Your verses brought a smile to my heart. Does it ryme with lay or let? I really don't know either. Beautiful word though. Very melodic. Thanks for sharing! Peace, Light and Love, CordieB.

Annie said...

You just had me laughing outloud, Linda. I love the three-way lay comment and in fact thought something similar but you were braver than I and just it right out there. LOLOLO, truly.

Crafty Green Poet said...

excellent, this flows better than many triolets do... Plus it made me laugh...

sister AE said...

congratulations! i couldn't even manage to get a triolet started. i've decided they just aren't my thing.

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