Yes, they are like wild animals lurking and yet at times most unwilling to be caught or even tamed. Even after posting I tend to go back and tweak it a little to get it to perform better.
I love this analogy..you write so beautifully and vividly it makes writers block seem like a source of inspiration in itself..maybe that poem did rear its head after all..jae
Well, I think it has found its way!
I often have the words stomping around in my head, just out of reach, like a petulant child or wild animal. I love the imagery you used to describe it :)
sometimes it is like that you want to express your feelings and its a jumble of words that won;t go together,
I love the feel of this poem and the expert way you wrote and put it all together,
Felt like a raging bull at first, then morphed to a cowering lion...nice
Oh, I love the metaphors all through this. And, the words are like that at times aren't they. Waiting to pounce or, trickle out slowly, painfully.Wonderful write.
Really enjoyed this piece. Great poem.
I understand this one very well!
wonderful, this portrayal of writer's block of just a poemto shy to emerge as yet.
How it hurts when that piece that we know is in our head, fails to come forward. Great imagery
Sometimes they feel like wild beasts, elusive, and unknowable. I love how this poem itself becomes an open palm, an invitation.
Nicely done - like the tension at the end.
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