Thursday, August 13, 2009

Totally Optional Prompts: Beach Thoughts

Ocean Park Beach, Maine August 13, 2009

four men playing Bocce

two little boys
and two little girls
building a sandcastle

a taildragger
trailing a banner:
JIMMY GREEKS LUNCH BUFFET $7.99 11-2PM

a fog bank
sitting like an angora
elephant just offshore

my feet
sifting through
sand

the shadow of my pencil
on white lined paper,
beach thoughts
flowing through

10 comments:

Anonymous said...

WOW!!!!
That was a real good one..
So you seem to have had a sunny, pensive day at the beach, I guess!!
Enjoy and do keep writing like this..
Feels like me sitting by the bench and rolling the words that flow from the scenes around within my mind..
This was just beautiful!!!
Keep writing..:)

Lisa said...

You really painted a good visual with words, I could see the sand and feel the warmth...

Tumblewords: said...

an angora elephant - superb imagery! This is a thoughtful and observant piece. Nice work!

Stan Ski said...

Sublime - well worth the visit.

gautami tripathy said...

Wonderful observations.

your yellow shirt contrasts with the pillar

Crafty Green Poet said...

I like the fog bank like angora...

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