The last line was quite powerful.
Your haiku says a lot. Great job. Good luck with the song.
'used to be' says so muchgrowing is painfulwell done!
...ouch that hurt!....wow, that was so very, very good...i enjoy the little poems that say so much....
Love how this calls attention to what was not written as well.Glad you took time to write this. Hope your song is written already.
Great!!
Nice haiku. Thanks for taking the time to write this while trying to write your mother's song. Good luck on finishing that song, too. Have a nice day.
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The last line was quite powerful.
Your haiku says a lot. Great job. Good luck with the song.
'used to be' says so much
growing is painful
well done!
...ouch that hurt!....wow, that was so very, very good...i enjoy the little poems that say so much....
Love how this calls attention to what was not written as well.
Glad you took time to write this. Hope your song is written already.
Great!!
Nice haiku. Thanks for taking the time to write this while trying to write your mother's song. Good luck on finishing that song, too. Have a nice day.
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