I often wonder (as trees are alive) if they feel pain. They did some experiments a few years ago and said that they do. I wonder. Very deep thoughts in this for both sides, as a tree lover, I feel sad for each of their losses but, I'm glad you added the saplings smile.:)
I love it! This terse piece is packed full. Wonderful technique--each little stanza a new perspective.
ReplyDeleteI often wonder (as trees are alive) if they feel pain. They did some experiments a few years ago and said that they do. I wonder.
ReplyDeleteVery deep thoughts in this for both sides, as a tree lover, I feel sad for each of their losses but, I'm glad you added the saplings smile.:)
wonderful executed.
ReplyDeleteOh how tender this meory and images look ...
ReplyDeleteSpare and beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThe trees and your words are so beautiful. The "execution" brought tears to my eyes, but I could see those saplings smiling.
ReplyDeleteWith a handful of words, you have created a breathtaking tale.
ReplyDeleteA Threesome
Evokes both the fragility of nature and it's resilience. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteYes, its an ill wind does nobody any good.
ReplyDeleteThe cycle of life, nicely captured.
ReplyDeleteI love the conceptof branches praying. When I look upwards in the forest, I always think of being in a cathedral. Lovely poem.
ReplyDeletewow and ouch. well-written.
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