Sunday, January 2, 2011

Calmed for One Single Impression


Calmed

The waves are tiny
just six-inch slats
moving slowly
along the sand

I escaped the land-locked
mountains and stand
on the beach
breathing peace

Each sea gull
is freedom
each shell
is abundance

The salt kisses my lungs
Driftwood is my soul
My footprints
scream I am alive

10 comments:

  1. What a beautiful poem...the ocean has this same effect on me. Lovely words!

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  2. Nicely done. Yes, the beach brings me alive too.

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  3. Having a beach nearby is such a blessing and you described the healing this brings so beautifully.

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  4. So very pretty, Linda! It makes me want to head south a hundred miles to Galveston, Texas.

    I love the beaches. Just watching the waves is so calming. I am wondering about the driftwood being your soul. Sounds like my motorcycle way back when.
    ..
    On the beach at St. John
    ..

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  5. love the passion you speak with... we all gotta have that place that sets us free....

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  6. A smooth ocean is so calming - lovely words!

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  7. Well done, I can see the ocean in my head and it is a wonderful sight indeed. Thanks for sharing this great piece!

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  8. Alive in nature...well done!

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  9. Beautiful poetry. I love this line: "The salt kisses my lungs" Stunning words.

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  10. Beautiful- the ocean and any water has the same effect on me as well. I love the last line!

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