Wednesday, July 21, 2010

3WW: Bait, Jump, Victim

Swallowed the bait whole
then jumped around for a while~
another victim
MY HUSBAND’S DIABOLICAL LURING
Another victim
swallows the alluring bait.
The fish jump. I jump.
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To see a picture of the actual fish he caught yesterday click here.
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12 comments:

  1. Thom GabrukiewiczJuly 21, 2010 at 9:42 AM

    Wonderful images and a great fish, too. Can I have some tuna?

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  2. anthonynorthJuly 21, 2010 at 9:54 AM

    That was great fun. Enjoyed it.

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  3. KJuly 21, 2010 at 9:57 AM

    I could see the fish! Good job.

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  4. gautami tripathyJuly 21, 2010 at 12:18 PM

    I had fun reading it!

    like an automata

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  5. Vinay Leo R.July 21, 2010 at 1:04 PM

    hehe.. could see the fish too.. :) a surprise ending given the start n the flow.. i was expecting this to go somewhere else.. enjoyed the read!

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  6. markJuly 21, 2010 at 4:39 PM

    Whole lotta jumpin' going on, right?

    Well done!

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  7. lissaJuly 21, 2010 at 8:39 PM

    wow! big fish! fun poem

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  8. AmityJuly 21, 2010 at 11:18 PM

    wow...i feel like jumping too out of glee seeing the bait got its victim!!!

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  9. Stan SkiJuly 22, 2010 at 12:24 AM

    Should have seen the one that got away...:)

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  10. shailJuly 22, 2010 at 1:06 AM

    Both the fish and you jump?? :) Great.

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  11. Dee MartinJuly 22, 2010 at 7:43 PM

    wow - puts my little bass story to shame lol. That is one huge fish!

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  12. Thomma LynJuly 22, 2010 at 8:38 PM

    Excellent imagery -- I like the metaphor of the fish.

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