Sunday, April 11, 2010

NaPoWriMo #11 The Thing You Didn't Choose

After Having My Tubes Tied

Snip, goodbye
Snip, goodbye
the poet,
the pilot,
the mechanic,
the waitress,
the logger,
the teacher.
Goodbye to future
children.
Snip. Snip.

4 comments:

  1. Very snippy. Unregretful regret maybe.

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  2. I like how to-the-point it is which makes it more emotional to me. Brave. Thanks.

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  3. Sorry to hear about that, but I like the poetic sound of snip goodbye and snip snip!

    Nicely!

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  4. it almost made me cry.

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