Wednesday, August 26, 2009

3WW: Fracture, Noise, Vanish

Noises
from your angry
mouth fracture the moonlight.
Feelings shatter into shards, then
vanish.
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13 comments:

  1. anthonynorthAugust 26, 2009 at 11:08 AM

    The hard word in this one. Excellently done.

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  2. Jane DoeAugust 26, 2009 at 11:11 AM

    A very good poem, I like the image of feelings shattering, it reminds me of a mirror breaking into sharp shards. Emotions can be just as painful as being cut by a broken mirror.

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  3. Thom GabrukiewiczAugust 26, 2009 at 11:28 AM

    nicely done. now go enjoy the sunshine.

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  4. bAugust 26, 2009 at 11:45 AM

    The creative mind at work...just great. Do you count the words or does it just come to you?

    b
    http://torristravels.blogspot.com/2009/08/in-our-memories.html

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  5. gautami tripathyAugust 26, 2009 at 12:15 PM

    You do cinquains so well!

    blowing over that mug of coffee

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  6. Andy SewinaAugust 26, 2009 at 4:54 PM

    Nice continuity!

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  7. MarkAugust 26, 2009 at 5:24 PM

    Amazing how you can convey so much with so few words. A universal truth that is well written.

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  8. Tumblewords:August 26, 2009 at 8:48 PM

    Ah, yes. Nicely done!

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  9. Anya PadyamAugust 26, 2009 at 9:32 PM

    That was a great cinquain!

    Nice use of the words!

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  10. LucyAugust 26, 2009 at 9:53 PM

    in so few words you've said so much
    very nice Linda

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  11. Tammy BrierlyAugust 27, 2009 at 3:44 PM

    Thank goodness they do vanish. Nice job Linda! Is school back in?

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  12. Stan SkiAugust 28, 2009 at 2:04 AM

    Great use of the prompt words.

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  13. AnonymousAugust 28, 2009 at 11:32 AM

    just brilliant! :)

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