Wednesday, August 5, 2009

3WW: Accentuate, Glamour, Pitch

An Annoyance Sandwich with a Side of Glamour

Pitch pines
surround our camp,
accentuate problems,
write calligraphy on the sky,
and drip.
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16 comments:

  1. Thom GabrukiewiczAugust 5, 2009 at 8:16 AM

    I love it. It's so simple and fresh, but with some wit, too.

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  2. anthonynorthAugust 5, 2009 at 9:23 AM

    Yes, simple but so clever.

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  3. Sherri B.August 5, 2009 at 10:05 AM

    It drips with visual imagery...loved it!

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  4. KJ McLeanAugust 5, 2009 at 10:17 AM

    I feel as if I'm sitting there watching them, trying to read the calligraphy and getting drops in my eyes! I like it! (The poem, not the pitchy eye drops. *grin*)

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  5. AnonymousAugust 5, 2009 at 11:33 AM

    aww..so sweet!
    small, short, subtle and soothing..:)
    Loved the feel and it was natural for all to be there, in time!
    Keep writing..:)

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  6. Andy SewinaAugust 5, 2009 at 6:35 PM

    Very visual! You take me there!!

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  7. Daily PanicAugust 5, 2009 at 8:03 PM

    sweet. about camping?

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  8. Tumblewords:August 5, 2009 at 10:23 PM

    Clever! I love the calligraphy reference.

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  9. MarkAugust 5, 2009 at 11:10 PM

    I like the form and the substance.

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  10. Americanising DesiAugust 5, 2009 at 11:54 PM

    very fresh and very full of life :)

    View on my way down *3ww*

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  11. Ann (bunnygirl)August 6, 2009 at 1:06 AM

    Very nice. I think I've been on a camping trip like that.

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  12. BobbieAugust 6, 2009 at 5:27 AM

    Very nice and flowing write. :) Great use of this prompt.

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  13. gautami tripathyAugust 7, 2009 at 12:15 PM

    I loved the drip!

    accentuated aura

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  14. lissaAugust 7, 2009 at 2:32 PM

    write calligraphy on the sky, and drip. - love these words together

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  15. JeevesAugust 9, 2009 at 11:17 AM

    Simple and good....

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  16. Dee MartinAugust 9, 2009 at 4:04 PM

    I love the idea of pines being calligraphy brushes! Very creative!

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