Wednesday, July 1, 2009

3WW: Sweet, Yearn, Collapse

My brain has been on vacation! Sometimes I just need a break. Here's a little cinquain.


When I Yearn

Barefoot
I walk along
the mirror of low tide.
The problems of my day collapse.
Sweet peace.
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11 comments:

  1. Thom GabrukiewiczJuly 1, 2009 at 9:08 PM

    simple, and simply wonderful. I'm feeling it.

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  2. Tumblewords:July 1, 2009 at 10:42 PM

    Perfect!

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  3. Ofira SephirothJuly 1, 2009 at 10:49 PM

    Short and sweet. Very nicely written.

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  4. floretaJuly 1, 2009 at 10:50 PM

    mine is a similar setting. i like your interpretation. definitely sounds nice to walk barefoot.

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  5. Americanising DesiJuly 1, 2009 at 11:59 PM

    couldnt have been more prompt :)
    My 3WW

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  6. JeevesJuly 2, 2009 at 1:08 AM

    Wow. Linda. I wanted to write something like this. You did it.

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  7. anthonynorthJuly 2, 2009 at 3:33 AM

    A perfect image there.

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  8. Daily PanicJuly 2, 2009 at 9:20 AM

    a beach can always remind us that we are on the edge of the continent and put some distance between us and our problems.

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  9. lissaJuly 3, 2009 at 1:01 PM

    sounds like a sweet walk, quiet walks can sooth the day's rough edges

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  10. PJDJuly 4, 2009 at 2:04 AM

    Barefoot walks bring us back to peace. Nice.

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