In Spite of the Gloom
Oak leaves
as big as hands
shine as if they’d
been painted
with polyurethane,
Fog, transparent
enough to see through,
settles like kneeling
parishioners in the pews
of pine trees.
I sit
inside the yellow sun
of our camper
typing letters
into words,
linking words
into sentences,
then watch as they
braid themselves
into this poem.
This was gorgeous...you captured a moment in such a visual way. I felt like I was right there!
ReplyDeleteCreating it as you go along. Enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteI'm definitely glad you had time to write this. :D
ReplyDeleteloved the descriptiveness, the turn into the creative exercise of writing.
ReplyDeleteyou can turn anything into a poem... and a good one at that!!
ReplyDeleteThis was indeed lovely !! a bright picture painted in words :)
ReplyDeleteDude! This is awesome! I love it! My favorite this week (so far at least, I have about 12 more tabs open on my browser!)
ReplyDeleteI love the description and the way it takes us from out in the woods to our very own moment of reading...
Happy 3WW!
enjoyed this - 'oak leaves big as hands' nice line.. words braiding themselves, nice image
ReplyDeleteAs I was reading, I was picturing my wife crocheting. Creating from something simple.
ReplyDeleteYou created from something simple and it was equally beautiful. Thank you for sharing your vision.
Lovely! Love the image of words braiding themselves!
ReplyDeleteHave a great time! :)
Wow.....
ReplyDeleteI like this. Very vivid.
ReplyDeleteA snap of time - beautifully done!
ReplyDeleteI love the setting and wish I were there.
ReplyDeleteLove the thought process, and the image of 'the pews of pine trees'.
ReplyDeletebeautiful and unique images!
ReplyDeleteGorgeous. Simply gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteI like how visual the poem is, and how well it flows.
ReplyDeletewonderful poem! :)
ReplyDeletenicely done! :)