Wednesday, May 20, 2009

3WW: efficient, optimize, treacherous

Waterfalls of change
are treacherous. I paddle
with efficient strokes.
OPTIMIZE MY CHANCES
With efficient strokes
I paddle through treacherous
waterfalls of change.
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15 comments:

  1. andyMay 20, 2009 at 7:24 AM

    Nicely Linda, clever use of the NaiSaiKu, I like the way you got the three little words in and optimizing Optimize in the title.
    Nicely

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  2. Thom GabrukiewiczMay 20, 2009 at 8:13 AM

    Great NaiSaiKu Linda. Don't forget to leave a link on the NaiSaiKu Challenge site to share. Hope you're feeling OK, too.

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  3. gautami tripathyMay 20, 2009 at 9:08 AM

    Linda, do take care.

    This is a beautiful NaisaiKu!

    no pawns spared

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  4. JeevesMay 20, 2009 at 9:39 AM

    Simple and very good. Like this one a lot.

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  5. anthonynorthMay 20, 2009 at 10:04 AM

    An excellent look at life there. Hope you're okay.

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  6. paisleyMay 20, 2009 at 10:21 AM

    excellent choice of a venue for the words. i just tried my hand at one of these yesterday. it is posted on ...just paisley

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  7. piaMay 20, 2009 at 1:14 PM

    I don't know NaiSaiKu but I do like it

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  8. Tumblewords:May 20, 2009 at 3:31 PM

    Wow! Love it! Love it!

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  9. Kristy WordenMay 20, 2009 at 7:34 PM

    I'm not sure what NaiSaiku is... but I'm sure this is a good one... I'll have to go look it up.

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  10. Daily PanicMay 20, 2009 at 8:33 PM

    there was a lot of hope in this. Change is treacherous.
    happy 3WW

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  11. AnonymousMay 21, 2009 at 2:44 AM

    nice thought !!

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  12. Neverending storyMay 21, 2009 at 4:16 AM

    Ok, so there is also NaiSaiku, my poetry knowledge grows in leaps and bounds. This worked well. Heading for waterfalls of change myself and rather looking forward to the ride.

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  13. when the musics overMay 21, 2009 at 4:15 PM

    Love the river as a metaphor for change! Very nice.

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  14. susanMay 21, 2009 at 11:10 PM

    Really made this form work. Great use of the words.

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  15. AnonymousMay 23, 2009 at 11:04 AM

    I love this! thank you for sharing, this is a keeper! it may end up posted in my office as inspiration (if you wouldn't mind!) -Meg

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