Snow Ballet Starring the Poetic Princess
It’s as if she dipped
her ballet slippers
in black paint
for when she moves
she leaves the calligraphy
of her heart
on the surface of the stage.
She twirls and swirls,
a snowflake
in an ice storm
and her crystals of despair
shimmer like razor blades,
slicing through the air,
shards of pain falling
to blanket the audience.
Ooooh. Love this idea of the ballerina painting calligraphy as she dances. Really cool!
ReplyDeleteVery imaginative with searing imagery.
ReplyDeleteThat is wonderful, Linda!
ReplyDeleteI love that image of the "calligraphy
of her heart."
It is exactly what you see when a dancer pours their soul into it.
yes lovely imagery of the dancer painting calligraphy with her feet
ReplyDeletelove the ballet shoes dipped in black paint. great image!
ReplyDelete*whistles*
ReplyDeleteAmazing thought!! And powerful moving image!!
Kudos!
I can see those pink satin slippers dipped in black paint.
ReplyDeleteI loved envisioning the dancer...VERY NICE!
ReplyDeletehello linda... what an imaginative way of expressing ballet and emotions... i like ballet it is poetic [haha] but never thought of it as pink shoes dipped in black ink to express emotions... blanketing the audience... awesome!!!
ReplyDelete"Calligraphy of the heart," "crystals of despair": I loved these images. I'm impressed by how you wove it all together. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteNicely done, love the line shimmer like razor blades, 'cos I love that word shimmer!
ReplyDeleteI feel as if I have been there.
ReplyDeleteSimply magical.
THE BEAST’S BLUFF
very nice...however I can not see my grandaughter dipping her ballet slippers in paint....she loves to paint...but she really looooooooooooves her ballet shoes
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful. It takes me from a beautiful imagery of the ballerina painting with her feet to pain shimmering like razor blades. This is sumptuous.
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing image, of her ballet shoes dipped in paint, dancing her soul.... gorgeous.
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