Thursday, April 30, 2009

NaPoWriMo Day 30!: Exercise for TOP

Just a short one today. I'm poemed out!
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My jeans
hang on the clothes line
running in place
squatting,
doing front kicks
and back kicks
to the wind’s
exercise video,

knowing this is the most
exercise they are going to get.
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9 comments:

  1. Tumblewords:April 30, 2009 at 9:01 PM

    Laughing - this is so clever! Love the imagery... Dancing jeans.

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  2. AnonymousMay 1, 2009 at 9:43 AM

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  3. Bsquared86May 1, 2009 at 10:47 AM

    I loved this!

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  4. Andy SewinaMay 1, 2009 at 5:06 PM

    Love it! A sort of line dancing, perhaps?

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  5. anthonynorthMay 2, 2009 at 4:16 AM

    Great humour and imagery. Loved it.

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  6. paisleyMay 2, 2009 at 8:30 AM

    and oh how i wish those exercises would transfer over to the body that the jeans will inevitably come to find inside of them...

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  7. OhMay 2, 2009 at 1:55 PM

    loved this! (love that you have a laundry line) and...it made me laugh (the last line, about the exercise!)

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  8. Kristy WordenMay 2, 2009 at 8:46 PM

    Liked this a lot! how clever to see wind blown jeans as 'exercising'. Brilliant!

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  9. AnonymousMay 8, 2009 at 2:47 PM

    I love this poem - so clever!

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