Friday, April 3, 2009

NaPoWriMo day 3: Threes

A Rainy Day Threesome

5 am
rain
gotta get out of here
drive drive drive
Mohegan Sun Casino
$100 in my pocket

$20 on quarter machine
nothing
Another $20
Slide it in a fifty cent machine

Three Double Diamonds
turquoise turquoise turquoise
pop pop pop

dingdingdingdingdingdingdingding

$800

Just like that

Play
eat lunch
drive drive drive
rain
home
5 pm
at

6 comments:

  1. Richard WellsApril 3, 2009 at 5:43 PM

    Fabulous! That's like an American quickie!

    Linda, please check back at the Djinn, there's a question I want to ask, but don't have your email so I'm asking there.

    Txh

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  2. Erin DavisApril 3, 2009 at 5:52 PM

    I love the quick, playful rhythm of this.

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  3. AnonymousApril 3, 2009 at 5:59 PM

    I like the way you play with threesomes in this poem.

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  4. susanApril 3, 2009 at 6:02 PM

    Love how you're able to work with a prompt.

    Thanks for coming by.

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  5. JeevesApril 4, 2009 at 12:16 AM

    Lovely, lovely. The flow is very good

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  6. Bev JacksonApril 4, 2009 at 9:20 AM

    LOL. This is fun, well done. I love going to casinos.

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